assignment from general english page 94

COHERENCE

Miyoko’s first stop on her flight from Tokyo to the United States was San Francisco(9). She expected to find the tall skyscrapers she had seen on postcards of New York(7). But San Francisco did not look anything like New York(3). For one thing, it is all built on hills(14). Many homes have view of the and ocean(5).
Miyoko especially liked the two bridges that cross San Francisco Bay(10). The Bay bridge is majestic(8). It crosses from San Francisco to Oakland(4). Even more beautiful is the Golden Gate Bridge, stretching from San Francisco to Marin Country(13). The Golden Gate Bridge separates San Francisco Bay from the Pasific Ocean (1).
After seeing the many hills and bridges, Miyoko was surprised to learn that San Francisco has a large Japanese population (12). She went to Japan center, where the buildings and restaurants looked familiar (2). Here she was able to talk with people in her native language (6). From them she learned that San Francisco is a most hospitable city for people from the Orient (11).